This Guys First Commentary

good job. thanks for sharing.

I'm watching all these commentaries today haha. I just finished the first one and I liked it. You were really nice in your commentating as in not just saying they did this wrong and what not. I would have been like that was just a bad idea at some parts. However you being nice does take away from the learning process. Like, even though they were winning the whole time, him just rushing straight for the flag was not a good idea at all. I don't know if his teammates called out that there were this many people dead on their team but I didn't see him check his scoreboard once for people alive when he was about to pull.

I look forward to the others.

yeah it was my start so i didnt wanna throw my name out as an ass.. now that im getting more comfortable though i can be more straight forward.. thanks for the feedback though it really helps with my next videos