This Guys First Commentary

this is a little rough and I intended to remake it in order to remove the tv background noise but im swamped with school and i have various requests to go through so here it is the first commentary by me, your friendly neighborhood Pwnage... hope this helps

i am also intending to stick with 2 per week, and i am not sure how i will choose for now it is at a first come first served so it remains fair. thank you all for taking the time to read this and enjoying my take at "Get Better Fast'' :D


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2bOl1hxOJEU

Commentary ++++ (I think your vid is a few seconds behind the one we watch :P), gameplay by both teams hahahahah :P

I'd also like to add, I'm pretty sure he sniped his teamate at the end :P hahahhaah

it is? dang... i apologize.. im using basic hardware so i can only do so much but on the next one i will definitely spend more time polishing things up for everyone..

lol yea i did at the end xD just celebrating the clutch win hope u enjoyed it man :) n eddie thanks again sick commentating keep up the good work if u need help in anything let me kno u got me on FB.

Was this 4s?, or did you go in by yourself?

naw i wen in wit my boy Deadpool aX the other 2 were randoms

Pretty good job commentating, definitely need to get it fixed on the lag issue though. Something I think you could improve on with your commentating; more emotion ,sound more excited when those clutch moments come, laugh a little :P. Other then that you did a pretty decent job for your first time. I need to get a vid up so you can commentate me as well :P

yeah sorry i sounded dead i was up for like my 37th hour then.. i got the video and i just had to get to work.. (actually i ended up passing out after it and i was late to my real work lol) but i did what i could with what i had.. on episode two ill do what i can with what i have even better lol.. im gonna take more time and overview my work more.


im still taking video links for me to commentate.. again you can all message me on facebook or on here, even on xbl..
if you have the video that makes it easier faster and less expensive for me.. if not as long as i have a file share link i can make it work.. thank you all for watching.. much love! -Pwnage

Hey man good commentary the only thing that bothered me was the voice to game lag time other then that great commentary I will definitely send in a video or 2!

Hey Pwnage sick commentary bro I would definatly love more Gameplay commentary from you would be awesome ! Once again great job mate = )

good job. thanks for sharing.

I'm watching all these commentaries today haha. I just finished the first one and I liked it. You were really nice in your commentating as in not just saying they did this wrong and what not. I would have been like that was just a bad idea at some parts. However you being nice does take away from the learning process. Like, even though they were winning the whole time, him just rushing straight for the flag was not a good idea at all. I don't know if his teammates called out that there were this many people dead on their team but I didn't see him check his scoreboard once for people alive when he was about to pull.

I look forward to the others.

yeah it was my start so i didnt wanna throw my name out as an ass.. now that im getting more comfortable though i can be more straight forward.. thanks for the feedback though it really helps with my next videos