Can you RATE my Game Play?

[Ray Done Dirty]

Rate this if you have time because it is kind of long sorry :/
this video includes
S1lent Shot
rrx Ephex
H2 Chilln
Evolved
v.s
Ray Done Dirty(me)
Alumnite
Planko Flows
Shadow LFG
now i was searching MLG alone a got on their team. Tell me how i play and what i do wrong, because i went positive and Shadow said i was stat whoring? do you think i was? Because i was putting shots on people its not my fault i got more kills!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EqCRd-My5Ns

[chris_cr33p]

good overall. if you get the sniper push out on the carbines. dont go ur bon or ur base. push as a team and succeed as a team

[Ray Done Dirty]

thanks man i will take your advice<3

[Krazer]

Gameclock


14:20-00 You hit some solid shots but then you get into a position where you cant help out your teammates

13:43 Questionable move since you challenged the guy to hard and then you get killed because of it. Try to let your teammates get the kill or just let it go.

12:55 not sure if your teammate called the guy to right or not, but it looks like you were pushing to clean up the guy under the turret and again sometimes you gotta let kills go.

12:10 not much that you can do but try to use the big rock for little bit of cover from the guy shooting you from carbine

11:58 you could've gone to your snipehut and team shot with planko and nade the bomb planter, and most probably stop the bomb plant but instead you try to do a sneak attack to the sniper which doesnt work out.

11:24 you and planko could have been protecting the guy arming and potentially get a plant, since one guy was in your base you already had numbers, gotta remember that they cant disarm the bomb in this gametype.

10:54 you and planko could have helped out samy at sniper since it would be a 3v1 or 3v2 instead of just chilling waiting for shields cause you guys arent one shot.

9:27 You couldve pushed up with the other two teammates and let planko grab snipe when he spawns but instead you just stay back waste like 15-20 seconds and in the end it didnt even work out. your teammates died and you died.

7:30 I wouldve gone snipe and try to work from there since you can have a little bit of more cover.

6:50 you do a random push and you get punished.

4:20 You position yourself where you cant get help from teammates and you always got to be aware of the enemies spawns

3:10 you focus waay to much on the guy in ring in that time you could have helped your team teamshoot.

:48 you have jetpack you couldve jetpacked to ring 2 and potentially stayed alive

Sorry If I sound too harsh but in my opinion the best way to get better is to see your faults

Edit: a little summary real quick.

You play too much for the sniper, causing you and your team deaths.

Try helping out your teammates more and slow down your shot.

Your positioning and awareness is what you need to improve a lot on.

Just because you go + doesnt mean you played well
Hope I helped

[Inexist]

Your going Bonfire too much, you need to start pushing more and get into their base when they don't have numbers! Going and staying Ring alot is pointless and you need to get out of your base like 89% of the time if you always grab the sniper and, your camping Snipe and Heath Pack for too long when your Teammates are trying to push out. But fun to watch.

Push out to their base! =]

[darkon124]

yea like everyone said, u are staying in your base wayy too much. u gotta put some pressure on the ennemi side in order to win. this even if it gonna cost you one death, pressure is important.

[KRILLIN]

More pressure like the rest said.

@Krazer, wow man. Keep that kind of help up and I see an AotM in your future (once you start posting more!)

[Krazer]

I try I was waiting for them to start the lan so I said why not and just chimed in. I just hope he doesnt take offense cause I just pointed out his mistakes though/

[Ray Done Dirty]

no bro its all good thats why i asked to rate it so i can take advice