My gameplay + commentary :O

[iDactyl]

So I went ahead and captured one of my gameplays and decided to commentate over it. What do you guys think?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A5gc7_b4NOM

Constructive criticism GREATLY appreciated :P

[HEA7]

I would give this GamePlay a 8/10. There are more cons than pros but all ur cons are minor things that can easily be corrected. Your pros outweigh the cons. P.S. I LOVE YOUR VOICE! like its one of the most relaxing ones ive heard in a while :O Like it makes in enjoyable to listen to

Quick rundown on pros: Good Teamwork/Listening, Utilized rockets well off start, good dmr.
Quick rundown on cons: Committed too much, sometimes lacked awareness (awareness does not just mean where ppl are), Unwillingness to run away, and lack of spawn knowledge

ill be more than willing to show ur smart decisions but it would require a lot more time on my part. If you even really care that is hahaha.

Now into the constructive criticism
@ 1:50ish, u got a little lucky. U committed too hard to the person on ur penis rock which led to u being double teamed. Somehow u lived and ur teammate killed the other person who was shooting u. I feel like if u ditched that kill after putting a few shots into him u would have had a much higher likelyhood of staying alive (even though u did) After that u should have just went for health pack instead of waiting for ur shields (no1 had a position to kill u)

@2:26, u were red bar but challenged the kid in tunnel. If it was a good kid u would have been naded and taken out in a heart beat. U should have just positioned urself on hut. IMO i would have run flag myself cuz ur teammate had sniper.

@3:37, i would have dropped down to cuts b/c they were making a big push towards ur Pee/Hut, Its really hard to get the underpressure headshots upclose like that and u could have given urself a MUCH better angel (AND the fact that they knew u had sniper and there were 3 ppl looking at u)

@5:24, You should know that b/c ur teammate just killed an a person in court, that they are probably going to spawn their hut. The person after that is going to spawn their rocks.

Overall good game. Your a very selfless player, u just put yourself into situations that could have easily been avoided/escaped from

Hit me up if u want to play sometime
GT: Hea7 uP

[Danimal04]

good gameplay. i would have liked more in depth commentary though. what was going on in your head and why you are making the decisions you make in game. excited for your interviews!

[BluePriiint]

Good gameplay, and I agree on what Danimal said about you should say what was going on in your head and why you made the decisions.. but im guessing this was kind of your intro vid? idk Good job though

[SullyVan]

Good Gameplay.. Looking forward to your interveiws:D

[iDactyl]

Haha thanks guys. Hea7 is officially an over-achiever haha :P That's really good advice and I'll hopefully improve my gameplay from your guys posts.

And yeah, the commentary kinda sucked, I should have gone more in-depth with my gameplay but I was kinda following the CoD commentator bandwagon and commentating on totally irrelevant things. I'll change it up next time though.

[itwuzmagik]

good gameplay great commentary def something i could sub to lol

[Montageee]

if you keep spamming im going to have a panic attack :D

[Cinderella_Man]

hey bud, I just watch your commentary. Really feel that you have potential in commentating due to what Heat said (that being your voice). It did make it more enjoyable, but this particular commentary was more so personal updates, etc. Definitely if you spread your knowledge of halo (not saying you don't know anything :) just saying) / know how to commentate it you could be a Pucket or Shibby. Even more so though, watched the tour of the MLG offices ... soooo cool! how did you get a chance to do that ??